Laurel Ahlfeld, about Between Beats: absolutely beautiful, Laurel. rhythmic and deep and heartfelt, literally. very impressive piece.
Laurel Ahlfeld, about The Truth:
another nice work... the thing is we don't stop loving so quickly or easily. well done capturing that.
distant moon, about Crescendo & Exhale:
mmm yummy!
gorgeous and short, even though you capture the climactic moment, leaves me wanting more. Great job, distant moon!
aparajita, about parenthetically speaking:
this line: "pearls of wisdom come at 3am that none of the condemned three really want to deal with" really hit home.
I am most beMused at that sleep-locked hour, can't write for fear I'll be up all night,. but sleep is an elusive bitch.
Nicely done capturing some of the stream of subconscious, aparajita. And good to see you posting too! :)
aparajita, about damned exhausted:
sing it, sister.
and hang in there. some balance has to come, sometime, right?