gala - Tones Of Sepia Madness - Yes! Most definitely. I admit I haven't read the poet that inspired it, though.
dee - I spent some time pondering why you'd made her fat. Till I worked it out (or at least I think I have). LOL. I liked it.
Thanks for the kind words, to those who sent them. : )
made her fat????
Fat was a bad word to use... Sorry.
I did like your work dee - it's just usually you're so open with the body etc. and this time the line that I understood to be her body went out - so I finally thought to myself - Oh! she's pregnant. But maybe it all meant nothing, after all, I'm no art critic. I liked it, for what that means.
ah, thats her arm dear-heart.
She's looking over her shoulder the sloping line down, is her arm/shoulder.
You all, I’m so far behind. This is going to be fast, furious and lengthy so skim or read tis up to you ha.
RennieLorca : the catch I love all of yours Rennie you make it hard to choose. Your input around here is so grand. We are so lucky to have you. How are you feeling lately?
Echolocation Silence is Golden This is lovely Echo, I love it.
willtobe1 Delicate The way you put words together is amazing. Hope you will continue to share with us.
coujeaux: Down and In This one could easily be a dance tune ha. Fun one!
Chances: Suffusion I like the way the word sounds to my mind and you make me want to see this guy ha.
Sister Galadrial: Tones Of Sepia Madness So now we will all have to find out who this woman is.
amaryllis: So Small I like your style and the way you put words together.
aparajita: pretty girl I like your writing as well. Welcome to the blender.
Star of David : My Jesus and I I’ve gone back and read all of yours again. I love them all.
Lulu: The Cuts Glad to hear this no longer happens. No matter what happens to you in life, Sweetie Pie SURVIVAL is where it’s at.
Jon: swept away I think every woman that reads here would like to have you cloned Jon.
By tj holland : Where Is His Father This one touched me deeply teej as I know exactly where you are coming from.
kevin urenda: drowsy Kev, you make it hard to choose they are all so wonderful.
Lilla: "Birds in cages sing of freedom, birds in freedom fly" Sophie is a lucky girl Lilla and this is well done.
deevaa: Poppy I like the textures of this one and the color.
wolfscreamer: Late Lament You set the scene well. I like it.
By ladyinwaiting : Happiness and Butterflies I think your friend is right, it has to come to you and want to be yours.
Footballdude; welcome to the blender and thanks for the comment on my work.
PoeticWheels; Likewise welcome, it’s a great place to write.
So many new faces and I’m flying thru (sorry if I missed anyone) Welcome to all of you!
bk
To~
RennieLorca, ladyinwaiting, Aparajita, Chances, Empyrean, and, of course, to Ali, O! Ali~
Thank you all for your kind words and support. I still feel at right angles to poetry by most of it names, but you are all clearly my brethren in word-love and love-love.
Failing any new inspiration, I plan to blow the dust off some old words and works and send them up the flagpole here, for what its worth.
And, of course, I'll wander when I can in the lovely forests of the words and works found here.
(Chances~ thanks for breaking at the brink of appellating me with "nice" praise -- I had a communications professor once who sourced the word to "nici" which, in a dead language, meant "not aware." Not far off from the bland meaning it retains today, eh? I know you had a positive meaning at heart. Yet does this not in fact well-befit much that we begin with wide-open mind to numbly swallow?)
Deliver me always from nicety!
wtb1
Kase; I hope you will stick around and keep writing for us. We are one diverse group here (I mean I only go crazy on full moons and no one ever knows when Sushi comes blooming in. I mean we even get to the point where we miss the abuse ha) There is room for everyone and we like it that way.
bk
Oh, and BK, too, I have to belatedly add to my list. Dost remember me, BK, from way back when?
Oh, and I have LOVED earthy native and truish passion of your works...
wtb1
Bryce, that poem to ur girl was tight!
B.K.~~~ I loved Baby Do It Again. Great job!!!
LuLu~ "Put It Down" was great. It reminds me of how I was. Now it seems that we both have someone to help us get through all the bad times we've had. If you ever need me LUNATIC...(hehe)...you know where you can find me!
BK~ I don't think EVERY woman here would like to have me cloned, more like two-thirds. LOL just kidding, honestly I don't think the world could handle an extra mumbling idiot who think's a little too much. Hehe, seriously thanks :-).
Take care and all that there-can-be-only-one stuff
-Jon
Gala~ here's a link for you since you have found Elinor: http://www.magiclink.com/web/lostheroines/webdoc4.htm I've always enjoyed learning more about these poets so their poems mean so much more. Enjoyed your Sepia work.
B.K.~ I am gaining weight and strength. Chomping at the bit to get out and live again. Thanks for asking. Glad to see your work again. Your poems always leave me with a smile. I thank you for that! Thank you for the compliment on my works at Blender. I just enjoy posting when inspired by others, which seems to be often.
willtobe1~ would be a treat to see you writing again with new or old works as you get reinspired again at Blender ..... Rennie
LuLu,
Love ya work!!!!!;)
RennieLorca: Thanks for responding to my question. Your response was helpful.
Lulu and Malu Lani: Thanks so much for your comment regarding Tangible. I really appreciate it!
lovestruck,
i likes "ill be there", thats how i feel about one of my friends, u know her! i like ur work!
jon: i really enjoyed writing process
Chances: The Fears was truly amazing
Carol: Until: i've been there myself.
Star of David~ such sadness in Alone I Am ... even more in the knowledge there is also someone else in this world the same and alone and who could be happy in your company. Take heart.
teej~ always rich visuals in your work ... "pyre of pages" ... "stealing him the way on steals cargo"
footballdude~ Welcome to Blender. Good to see you write someone is "worth the wait" ... and "trust" someone ... and "Your friend" ... Thanks for your compliment.
tanq~ "because the next town could be one
where one smile make the world stop
and the pain go away" ... I like that because of the way I've always valued smiles.
Lulu~ Thank you. Your Just the Wind is a good reminder in its beginning of how love, past or present, can still help save us until life works out again.
ladyinwating~ The Name I Whisper is so good in questioning of relationships. I'd like to see more of this one and the route it takes.
Kase~ someone loved me no matter what happened to me in life. I've seen what people call "miracles" happen around me and to me. I wish the same for you. In the meantime, remember or realize, love heals.
Dana~ dont know how I may have helped, but thanks. Just write. Someone wanting to use or publish your work will certinly organize it for you. You'll have problems enough in them trying to edit your poems :) ..... Rennie
footballdude~ yeah i know who she is! she's one of the people I talk about anything to! She's a great person!
*lovestruk*
Chance~~"True Disillusionment" I really liked it!
Chances~~"True Disillusionment" I really liked it!
So many thanks!!
To Chances, Star of David, Echolocation, Tanq, B.K., Rennie Lorca, and anyone else I may have forgotten....THANK YOU for such great comments on "My Grandfather's Room" and "Where Is His Father?" I was surprised at the response! Made me feel GREAT!!
-Teej
Muryan~ "The Gift Of My Heart"...I feel the same exact way towards my boyfriend. I hope you have someone very special to share your heart with. :)
B.K.~ I VERY MUCH liked Stardust Caress. It swirls like the stars you so aptly write of...
And you wrote it on my birthday two years ago! I found that to be a pleasant coincidence.
Write on,
-Teej
Footballdude And Lovestruk-
Thank you both. You are both very important people to me and I value our friendship. Thanks for all the kind words you have said about me, and thanks to footballdude for the poems. You guys help me alot, and I hope I do the same for you.
~*Lulu*~
Rennie-
I am glad you enjoyed "Just the wind", Thanks for reading.
~*Lulu*~
Rennie ~ thank you for your statement...how I wish I could go back and change it all...the mistakes we make along the way leave us empty sometimes...made the grave error of seeing an old flame, just to talk nothing more...however left doubt in the mind of the one I really cared for...the meeting with the old one was to find closure in order to move on...and when the other ask if I had seen them...I was honest but was never given the chance to completely explain...I guess sometimes honesty is not the right answer...or so I am lead to believe that...so, thus The Name I Whisper is and end....