From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=35">Star of David</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Kevin Urenda,<BR>
I just finished reading everything you have submitted. Your poems keep getting better and better and I love the way you use words so beautifully. But I must say that the following verse will always be one of my favourite verses of all your poems: <BR>
“When the vapor trails <BR>
of racing across your sky <BR>
finally disappear <BR>
I’ll still remember <BR>
that you raised my eyes <BR>
from the dead”<BR>
(The Glory Of Almost)
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=222">poyen_fpy</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

lulu, I liked Prove It. it's so hard to be so open sometimes. love makes us feel so vulnerable!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=35">Star of David</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Kevin Urenda,<BR>
I remember 'Collage' from way back when you first submitted it. I still have a printout that I took of it to read again and again.
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=34">Just Some Girl</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Thank you, Star of David!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1139">jwb71913</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Cryinshame, <BR>
<BR>
Happy birthday!<BR>
<BR>
Jim
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=902">spaded</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Kirk- That is so funny..."You're So Cool". I have actually used those words to express "I Love You". Of course it had nothing to do with that particular movie, but more a song that was popular at that point in time. My point is that I totally agree that it is an awesome way to express love for someone, and I almost think it says a lot more. I mean we all know it is possible to love someone and hate them at the same time. You're so cool kind of takes that away, cause either you think they are or not...lol.<BR>
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Holly
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1176">aparajita</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

lady...  i LOVED 'that tie', and like you, i am putty for a man in a tie as well.  you are right, it does define the man.  i particularly am drawn to men that are secure enough to wear ones for fun...  veggie tales, cartoon characters, Christian influenced, etc.  thanks for this one... it is a masterpiece!!!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1103">ladyinwaiting</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Kase ~ Lies will kill...um loved it...and so true...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Lulu ~ Prove it and Nothing...omg girl you have touched me deeply...keep up the good work...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Just Some Girl ~ War...great just great...thank you for sharing<BR>
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CryingShame ~ No Way You Can Forget Me...I loved it as always...yes wouldn't it be grand to think that we etch memories in someones heart that will remain for a life time...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Chances ~ Rebound...awesome, just awesome...don't you just hate the rebound time...or being the transitional person for someone on the rebound...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Dana ~ Awaiting Email...I loved it...how I can relate...oh how I can...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Willtobe1 ~ Unrequitable 1 and 2 ...god your so good...cut to the heart and soul...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Misti ~ welcome back as you breeze through...your writings are just awesome...thank you for sharing<BR>
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It's Me Again ~ Here Goes Nothing...I have lived those moments...wonderfully written...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Champagne ~ Hold Your Fire...oh yea...doesn't love feel like that sometimes...makes you want to take cover...thank you for sharing<BR>
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Jim ~ oh my sweet Jim...Soft place to land...god I hope your there to catch me...as always just loved it...awesome piece...thank you for sharing<BR>
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I know I have forgotten to mention someone...I apologize now...because all the submissions are awesome...sharing of each other....I really love all of you and love this site....thank you Kirk...thank you for making my dream come true...thank you all<BR>
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1176">aparajita</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

willtobe1...  i need a cigarette now after Part 3!!  you have no idea how much i enjoy your writing.  thanks so much!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1103">ladyinwaiting</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Willtobe1 ~ omg I think I am in love with you...more more more...please!!!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1050">Kase</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

willtobe1- Unrequitable, part 3--  I agree, a cigarette would be nice after that one!  You should not do those things to my thighs! Thank God I get to see my man tomorrow night!!  Keep it up, I'm inspired (that's a new word for it!) LOL  Really, it's great.
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=872">CryingShame58</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

I appreciate the thoughtfulness of those that have sent me birthday greetings, email and ecards...I am think and feel that i am truly blessed...Thanks for that...<BR>
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Ladyinwaiting...<BR>
this AM I smiled, when i read "That Tie"...and bless you for submitting <a href="/blend/wv.cgi?id=2003.03.27.14.25.32511">Military Man</a> ... we are all deeply affected by the war...I have chosen not to listen or watch the news the past few days, so I can celebrate my milestone and get a few zzzz's...I am usually a cheerful soul and find the positive....Growing up listening to the casualties, MIA's & POW's of Vietnam, I have the tendency to become melancholy by what i hear and see of this war...<BR>
I appreciate your comments on my latest submission...<BR>
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Jim, your descriptions in [2003.03.27.09.23.23323]] were uncomplicated, but contained detailed elements...lovely...<BR>
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CryingShame
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=872">cryingshame58</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

sorry JIM!<BR>
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<a href="/blend/wv.cgi?id=2003.03.27.09.23.23323">Good Ground</a> !  so lovely to me...<BR>
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Cryinshame
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1050">Kase</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Crying Shame-- Can you stand one more well-wisher?  Happy Birthday to You, you live in a Zoo....LOL  Best wishes one being one year younger!  (and one more wiser!)  Your comments on the board, (along with Rennie) give me a lot of insight and your wisdom is awe-inspiring.<BR>
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Deevaa-  What a wonderful talent you have with art and words!  Your paintings leave me breathless, and you write too?  Such a rare combination!  I'm was left speechless when I checked out your site.  I can't draw a straight line, so you amaze me.<BR>
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Dana--  I love your referrals to your little boys in your past works.  I have a 3 year old of my own and I can relate easily.  The fact that you have time to write a grocery list, much less poetry, with twins is quite a feat in itself.  Your work is wonderful, keep at it.  Though you don't know me, kiss them babies for me, because babies can never have enough love!<BR>
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Chances-  I've been reading some of your past works (and the recent ones too, of course) and you have the rare ability to make me feel your words.  Sometimes, just a gentle stirring, and sometimes red, raw energy. <BR>
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Misti-  All I can say is WOW!  You deserve to be published so badly that it's a sin you not on a best seller's list. I admire you.  When you get those books out in print, let me know so I can be the first in line.  One day I'll be able to brag to people that I seen your work on a web site long before they figured out what good reading was!  (Yes, I'm sucking up, in hopes that when you're published I might can get you to give me a personal autograph!)<BR>
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Sorry for such a long rambling "comment", but I'm having a pretty good week health wise.   I had an experimental laser surgery done to remove scar tissue built up in my kidney the results seem to be hopeful so far.  It's not a permanent solution, but it may but me some time before anything more evasive has to be done.  As corny as it sounds,  those of you that believe in God, please keep me in your prayers.  Thank you, because I know you all have busy lives and worries of your own to deal with.  <BR>
May God keep all of you safe in the palm of His Hand....
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1139">jwb71913</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Cryinshame,<BR>
<BR>
Thanks for noticing.  When I finished it had almost twice the words, so I just started shaving.  I tried to leave only the idea without any extra descriptives.  A little different for me, but perhaps it worked.<BR>
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Happy Birthday again.<BR>
<BR>
Jim
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=17">deevaa</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Thanks for the feedback guys, I've noticed there is a word missing, but won't re-post to correct it.<BR>
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Kase *wink* I can't draw a straight line either, curves are much easier. <BR>
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Take care of you<BR>
<BR>
dee<BR>

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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=35">Star of David</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Willtobel,<BR>
You are fantastic!!!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=962">Lulu</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Ladyinwaiting-thank you, I'm glad I had an effect on you.<BR>
poyen_fpy-Thanks, I'm glad you liked it..Love really does make us feel vunerable.<BR>
aparajita- Thanks..I'm glad you enjoyed it.<BR>
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Wow..Dont I feel loved?? Lol =D..Thanks again.<BR>
~*Lulu*~
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=158">footballdude</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

LuLu,<BR>
  i love ur work, ur latest is one of the best, this chris dude most meen something too u! he prob. likes u alot! keep up the good work!
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1174">Dana</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

Kase: My boys are 18 month old twins so I really never have time for anything at all other than cleaning and errands that are necessary. I actually just finished cleaning my stove a few minutes ago and here I am at 11:00pm. I tend to just scribble down a thought to a poem as I think of it. When I have thoughts of a complete piece in my mind it usually doesn't take long for me to get it all down on paper and then I will edit when I get the chance to. As for a grocery list, I have an ongoing grocery list all week long. I add one item here and there as I think of them. It's posted right on my fridge so it's handy. Anyway, Thanks so much. <BR>
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RainbowChaser: Thank you for your comment. As for me telling you about myself, I am married with 18 month old twin boys and have been writing poetry for nine years but only recently heard about this site. I was really not an "internet person" until about six months ago. I have enjoyed many pieces on this site and have been inspired by many as well. Again, thank you for your comment. Your words are appreciated. <BR>
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ladyinwaiting: Thank you for your thoughts regarding Awaiting E-Mail.  <BR>
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To everyone who has a loved one in the war, may peace be with you and your friends and family and may God watch over you. <BR>
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God Bless America and our troops for their bravery. 
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From: <a href="/blend/av.cgi?id=1120">Chances</a><BR>
Date: 27 March 2003<P>

ladyinwaiting - Thankyou. What can I say? I actually thought that one was crappy - but so it goes.<BR>
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Kase - I'm speechless from your comment. I enjoyed the simplicity of <a href="/blend/wv.cgi?id=2003.03.26.22.38.4289">Lies will kill</a>.<BR>
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RainbowChaser - <a href="/blend/wv.cgi?id=2003.03.27.11.50.22527">Desire</a> - Very good piece.<BR>
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willtobe1 - I have lost myself in your Unrequitables, especially no. 3. Amazing.<BR>
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tastetherainbow - <a href="/blend/wv.cgi?id=2003.03.26.13.42.27141">Exhale</a> and <a href="/blend/wv.cgi?id=2003.03.26.13.48.2330">This Endeavor</a> were food for the soul. Yum.
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