BK, Baby Please – wow!
Corinna, Second Chances – reads like a song, nice
Chris, Walking Well Before Midnight – loved this bit most “a smoke would be good, but nothing beats the rush I get thinking of you. And you know I love you. You know I live for you. This much I can be certain of. But you don't know the half of it”
And midnight song for janis – brilliant as always
Musicalduck, All it takes – good one, end took me by surprise
Cryingshame58, What a Dream! – enjoyed this
Marsh, Drive Away (I Don't Miss You) – I just can’t get over this one, it’s so beautifully and heartbreaking
Really liked Don't Believe too
I'm just him, my extra pair of shoes – enjoyed reading this, it paints a nice picture
Irongirl, Rock Star 101 – loved this one
Darby
Resolutions - I just read this, and loved it. The way you've written it is so straightforward and sad, that every line rings true.
Anyone know where Kevin Urenda is now? He hasn't written in ages. Was reading his earlier stuff and found this amazing line in losers
"I realized that I had lost
more words than the stars I couldn’t even see
when I lost you"
Thanks, Star of David. I've been unusually inspired lately.
I think this week has been inspiring for me as well Chris and thanks Star for your comment. It's been a terrible week work wise leading up to the full moon tomorrow night. Maybe that is why I am focusing on writing to overshadow that. Or perhaps I fear not being able to write anything on Valentines Day so I am writing it all early. Not sure.
Hope you are all keeping warm and the snow storm is not too bad for those of you on the East Coast. It missed us thus far but they are saying maybe some tonight. They always tease us like that and it skirts around us.
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